MarcusRaven's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unicycle Masta]

Be happy for a 2!

I rated this at 2 stars for only two reasons. 1) Your videos were somewhat impressive. 2) You were able to properly make buttons and a loading sequence, though the buttons were generic public domain ones and there was no proper way of knowing when the loading progress would be complete.

This really isn't classified properly. Its a collection of short movies. HAVING BUTTONS DOES NOT MAKE THIS A GAME. Also, the music in the background was the only sound you had. Not very impressive in terms of a flash movie.

Another reason this isn't getting a good rating is because you have posted video evidence of blatant health code and (I assume) company policy violations. I'm sure your state Health Department and Subway's corporate offices would LOVE to know that a unicycle wheel has been on public surfaces in that store. Not a smart move on your part. Sure, you were jumping from a high place, but if I knew where that Subway was, saw this, and knew that I shopped there, you'd lose a customer. That's honestly disgusting. Last thing I want to think about while you make my sandwich is if the food you're using was on that metal table in the back.

While you may have skill and balance in your talent, you lack skill and intelligence in your presentation. Hope your boss(es) don't watch this.

FourStar responds:

thank you for your concern

[-PURSUIT-]

Amazing!

I absolutely love it! Your interface is flawless, the graphics are clean and fitting. Nothing stands out like I should be able to use it. (Which is perfect for this genre.) The voices are crisp and clear, and they really bring life to the characters. All sounds and music are perfect. Overall, I love this game and can't wait to see what's next.

Just one problem - I'm stuck in the sewer and your walkthrough link doesn't work. Hehe...

Godlimations responds:

I thank you. *takes a bow...

[Swoopa]

Well done...

I love Ezone stuff. I used to go there all the time. This was a really good game. It did get repetative, but all you need to fix that is more variety. More types of fish, more powerups, etc. The bonus game was a nice twist, too. Little flaw though, you let the menu pop up. I didn't have to play all 15 levels. I just hit "Play" until the password pops up. Clever password, though. UNSEALED. Funny. All in all, great game.

LennyEzone responds:

Thanks Marcus! I've got a new version where I've minimized the menu pop-up. A little tip for you young punters out there , just add:

'Stage.showMenu = false'

[Are You Listening]

That was awesome!

That was the best thing ever! My friends and I were not expecting that at all. Great punchline. I laughed so hard!

Jaleho responds:

What makes it even more of a surprise is that I added some actionscript to make the number of pokes random each time... so if you run it a second time, it might take shorter or longer for Ike to get shot... you can watch it multiple times and still get surprised!

[Zach dress up v.2]

Nicely done...

At least I'm not alone in the "non-nude chick" dressup creation. Very well done. Those items were great! The only thing I docked ya for was sound because that music in the background got annoying. I would recommend making a few tracks to select from so the user can use what they like, or just shut it off. Besides that, GREAT JOB!

umpuehf responds:

Ya, I like the fact that in this dress up that it actually is making the people look cool. In the next one I will try to have better music. Thanks for the review.